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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2009-11-07 08:14 AM



Soft Caring

Each day presents itself
like an open book
knowing that I am working
beyond that lifetime
of youthful dreams...

possibilities once held,
now in the silence of my thoughts,
while in the mirror
witnessing
I am...just me.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2009-11-07 10:12 AM


m
you are beautiful
i love the new pic

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2009-11-07 10:37 AM


Thanks Helen, someone told me they preferred me smiling so I just uploaded the same pic with a smile soon to be showing. Age is getting the better of me now


M

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-11-07 12:25 PM


~ and "just" being you is a beautiful thing to behold ~ both inside and out! Love your new photo!

Kiss the mirror for me!

Linda

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2009-11-07 04:48 PM


Thanks Linda, I thought it about time to put up a newer picture although I dread looking at myself these days


M

Margherita
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5 posted 2009-11-08 08:46 AM


Beautiful! Smile at your mirrored image, dear Maureen and tell yourself "you are beautiful and every new day brings new opportunities, you are so much more than you allow yourself to think you are!".

Love the new picture too.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

vandana
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6 posted 2009-11-08 12:08 PM


liked it
Marchmadness
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7 posted 2009-11-08 01:47 PM


Beautiful new picture, Maureen. I think "just you" is a kind, caring and lovely person and this poem is one of my favorites of yours.
                             Ida

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8 posted 2009-11-08 06:37 PM


Just you is just wonderful. *S*
LindsayP
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9 posted 2009-11-08 08:04 PM



Ditto to Linda and Margherita's response

dear Maureen, they said it all, love,

Lindsay

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10 posted 2009-11-10 04:26 PM


Excellent piece of work in such a little amount.
p.s, love the new photo!!


ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2009-11-10 07:09 PM


Silky...James
latearrival
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12 posted 2009-11-10 07:17 PM


Maureen, All things are possible, and there is no "just you". Every one is somebody to someone. You have not found the all of it as yet. All those little  children you have taught will remember you and not as (Just Miss Maureen). Take heart.latearrival
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
13 posted 2009-11-10 11:40 PM


Maureen - just you writing from the heart inside. Your new photo looks great...

BC

Poetal
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14 posted 2009-11-11 12:04 PM


Never give up on your dreams. This was a wonderful write and showed tender feelings. Good job and thanks for the good read.

AL

AL Inmon

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
15 posted 2009-11-16 06:08 AM


Margherita, thank you for the kind words, they are appreciated. I see my sister in the mirror staring back at me~~ some days are hard to take.

Thank you vandana, it is always nice to see you here.

Ida,thank you for taking the time to respond  

Ruth, always wonderful to see you here again. Hope all is well.
                              
Lindsay,thank you kindly, Sir  

AW, good to see you thanks for the visit!

James M, You are too kind...


latearrival,  well some days are "very trying" and as much as  I love this time of year, it  doesn't seem to love me that much  lately~~ an age thing~~ I guess. But I am trying to think positive  

BC, tried the newer photo, still doesn't look like me in my eyes ( maybe I need  glasses)


AL, ahhh  dreams are  just about gone..I have decided to  be content with what is and hope that doesn't change too much. Thank you and welcome!

M


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