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HopeS
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0 posted 2009-11-05 11:57 AM






If Only To End The Silence

Messages which go unread
I often wondered why
Still I am left to guess
Since not getting their reply

I got nowhere with guessing
So I write again instead
If only to end the silence
I hope this message is read

The reason for my message
Is because I still care
I wish they would reply
As silence was hard to bear

Still being their forever friend
Which I shall always be
Its the reason I had sent
Messages in loving sincerity

HopeĀ© 2009


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1 posted 2009-11-05 01:20 PM


Yes you sure do!  I love everything you send me.  Have a wonderful day over there!

        
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2009-11-05 02:08 PM


Dear Hope, such a pleasure to read you and I do understand your insisting in sending messages. Nothing hurts more than not knowing the reasons of silence.

Beautifully done as always.

Love,
Margherita

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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3 posted 2009-11-05 03:14 PM


Hope, Hope, Hope, so GREAT to hear from you again. It's your old buddy Brad from Spyder's Poetry.  

This piece is SO timely because I know EXACTLY what you're talking about. I had been writing this girl, texts, emails, calls and heard nothing, I hurt, wondered if I had said or done something wrong and then last night, she writes me a long email like nothing ever happened. I guess all we can do is keep at it, keep sending those messages, or just feed them with silence until they decide to contact us.   and keep Hope "Silence must have its reasons" THAT is a GOLDEN line!

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20
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4 posted 2009-11-05 05:14 PM


Hope - There is a human need to fill voids, gaps and emptiness. This speaks well to that. Nice job Hope. Namyh
passing shadows
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5 posted 2009-11-05 06:17 PM


I love to hear from you! Sorry I haven't been around much.

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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6 posted 2009-11-08 09:47 PM



Dear Hope that is a very poignant poem my

dear and I really feel for you. Good luck Hope and may they write back soon. Love.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2009-11-09 08:33 AM


'High' Hope!

So that's what you have been doing! Writing letters to fill the silence. We 'sensitive types' take stony silences personally. However, I've come to understand that ofttimes it has nothing to do with us. It's just that 'they' get so caught up in their own lives that they forget to 'smell the roses'. Another fine heart spill, dear 'Rose'!

Love and a big warm hug,

Linda

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