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Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

0 posted 2009-11-04 02:18 PM

You are the melody sung in my heart.
You are the symphony played in my soul.
You are the song that never grows old.
You are my perfect rose.

You are the ballet danced by the stars.
You are the Milky Way and Mars.
You are the rain that falls softly on my face.
Your love is like sweet potato pie I love to taste.

You are the clouds that float in the sky.
You are my sweetheart til the day I die.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-11-04 03:23 PM

Dear Lamar,
you write lovely poems and it is nice to have you among us.

Just want to draw your attention to the fact that you have posted a total of 31 poems and the total number of your posts is exactly that: 31 posts. This means that you have never ever left a comment on any other poet's work or even written a "thank you" to those who reply to your poems. I would kindly ask you to interact, as it is in sharing and reading and commenting that we act in the spirit of this beautiful site.

You imagine if everybody did just what you do? There would be no replies to any poem and it would be totally boring.

I would have written this in a personal e-mail, but you have not indicated it, so I decided to speak openly to you.

You enjoy the replies you receive I am sure. So this is just intended as a gentle nudge.

Love,
Margherita

GBride
Senior Member

since 2009-07-02

Posts 538

2 posted 2009-11-08 09:54 PM

Nice poem LC
Your poems are like the songs that larks sing at break of day.
They touch each and every one of us in such a special way.
You lift our loads and break our chains so that we can be free.
You have a special talent now, come on, can't you see.
I really can't let a beautiful poem like this one go off the page with only one comment.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-11-08 10:02 PM

Yo Lamar Cole,

Your poem is very well arranged. and that's a very good thing.

Bobby

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-11-09 09:19 AM

Ain't love grand!

There is a sweet purity to this that makes both my lips and my heart smile.

I am happy for you! ~ and for her!

EA

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