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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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New Orleans

0 posted 2009-11-03 05:24 PM


Its not comin'
Its not on the journey
Painting so beautiful
Yet its become blurry

I'll let it hang, for a day or so
Light the candle
Watch it burn, for a day or so
Snuff it out
The flames leap, for a day or so

You won't second glance
You won't take a peek
And when I'm gone
You won't wonder
When you sleep

Hands are shaky
I feel it comin'
I want the poison
Heart starts drummin'

Feel it in my veins
I cant out-run it
Sweat pouring from my pores
Tangled in my sheets
Pillows a rock

A prince with no king
A throne on a mound of salt
A song too bitter to sing
Then the day is done

And another has begun.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

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AncientHippie
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since 2009-10-15
Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow
1 posted 2009-11-03 06:24 PM


Very dark and bleak work, Zach.  It speaks on so many levels, and all of the words are without hope.  Nicely crafted, but, man!  what a major downer!
Namaste
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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