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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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i locked the gates and supposing it safe retreated convincingly veiled inside though in retrospect it might not have been wisest thing to do… you know… to let impetuosity throw the key for its started to rain and i am ankle deep |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
Short and intense. Love it. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Bail, lady... bail. *S* And scoot over... cause I'm not leaving you to bail alone. *S* This is wonderful!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Incredibly creative! Love, Margherita |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
What a singularly haunting and fascinating piece you have written! Just this one snip of time, captured, and leaving us crying out for more. What happens next? What happened before? More! More! Bring it on. Namaste Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
thank you all *s* slowly...  suthern......bailing is good exercise...right? cause we are both gonna get some this time.....sigh m...thank you ancient......ah...what went before is a lifetime......and chronicled here for the most part...though the pen name has changed as did the era of writing...what comes after I don't know....its still raining... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Y'know, honey? You do have a thing about gates...and I'm glad to see you've opened them back up. Hugging you. K |
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