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MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

0 posted 2009-10-29 07:12 PM

Show me yours
And I'll show you mine
Fateful words indeed

Who'd have guessed
Such a simple request
to become a life long creed

Tempted and enticed they were
by his piercing baby blues

His sultry smiles
tempt and beguile
Even those he didn't choose

Cuddled and sequestered in
dark and secret halls

Spin the bottle
to kiss and coddle
Says the line that starts it all

Show me yours
and I'll show you mine

If I don't say it...who will?

[This message has been edited by MorningStar (10-29-2009 11:34 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2009-10-29 07:41 PM

That was fun! What a great read! thanks!~L

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2009-10-29 09:55 PM

Promise? :P Loved It!

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

3 posted 2009-10-29 11:21 PM

L - Wow, thanks!! I'm glad you liked it. I totally don't do rhyming - so I just thought...what the heck!

If I don't say it...who will?

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

4 posted 2009-10-29 11:23 PM

s1nfully - But of course!! But like so advertised...you first!

Aenea

If I don't say it...who will?

tommy738
Junior Member

since 2009-10-28

Posts 33

5 posted 2009-10-31 03:58 PM

fun read i really liked it

Osprey
Member

since 2009-04-12

Posts 249

6 posted 2009-10-31 04:30 PM

I'm just an old cynic, but this reads very dark to me. Very dark

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

7 posted 2009-10-31 05:13 PM

Tommy738 - Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed

Osprey - never fear, no dark undertone here. This was written after a talk w/ a friend whose life long quest is romantic tête-à-têtes. His creed: "Lips come in every flavor - and I must sample them all in order to be a true connoisseur".

If I don't say it...who will?

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2009-10-31 06:27 PM

MorningStar - here's blue piercing at you...

BC

TriumphGirl
Junior Member

since 2009-10-31

Posts 13

9 posted 2009-10-31 06:57 PM

This made me smile and remember high school.
Very nice!

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" ~ Plato

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

10 posted 2009-10-31 07:26 PM

BC - Wink. Wink. ;0)

TriumpGirl - Thanks for reading! I'm glad to have brought a little joy your way.

Aenea

If I don't say it...who will?

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

11 posted 2011-04-20 10:43 AM

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