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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2009-10-29 11:19 PM

You're a sick little girl
oh, yes you are
you've sold your own soul
shattered your own heart
all to be cold
hard as a rock
feeling is too painful
so, emotions you block
you destroy anything beautiful
that crosses your path
you search for their weakness
and use it for laughs
you refuse to break down
you keep it all inside
so no one will ever know
its your heart that you hide
see, it's been broken already
won't take much more
no one can ever touch it
no, you've sealed that door
so, you hide behind your rage
in your broken paradise
you'd rather be alone that hurt
you've chosen your own demise
I'm sorry I can't help you
and I hope you come to see
that the sick little girl
just happens to be
Me.

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2009-10-29 11:26 PM

I have read this type of sadness before, and this won't be the last time either. It is just so sad that women in this position don't take their power back and not be victim but instead victorious! If you dare to dream they come true. Nicely done.

Mysteria

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

2 posted 2009-10-29 11:58 PM

you speak so well as to the truth of not just you but many others. Well written, expressed, good read

AncientHippie
Member

since 2009-10-15

Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow

3 posted 2009-10-30 08:26 AM

A very sad read, s1nfully. The style is perfectly suited for this emotionally charged work: terse, accusatory, resigned. We are forced to conclude that habit will triumph over commonsense, which is not the way it should be, but then it would not be a tragic work, but one of joy and triumph.
Go well, girl.
Peace
Jim

"We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2009-10-31 07:34 PM

Thanx Guys.

-Trina.

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

5 posted 2009-10-31 09:19 PM

This reminds me of what my mother always says to me: Diamonds are shining and beautiful but no one wants one where their heart should be...

Grace and peace to you.

Aenea

If I don't say it...who will?

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-11-01 03:25 PM

I think many of us can identify with these feelings... it's hard to risk hurt again... but so satisfying when we start making peekholes in those walls. *S* Well written!!

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

7 posted 2009-11-01 03:30 PM

I think we all find ourselves being that "sick little girl" or boy as the case may be, at some point in our lives. After all, one can only take so much.

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

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