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Mind's Reins |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
How the mind does pull reins to heart's passion pose once windswept mind's wind drift, jibes HO! Crossing the wind pulling the reins to confused current boat flows when captain alone knows not the way home oh how the mind quickly finds reins to passion's blow! |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
An interesting piece. My only critique really is that "rein" was spelled incorrectly each time it was used. It should be r-e-i-g-n. Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
thank you for pointing that out, correction noted and made.  No, wait, rein was right, Im talking about the straps you use to guide horses. though your spin with reign in mind, gives it different meaning which I wasn't going for |
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