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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2009-10-28 04:59 PM





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Touch me

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Touch me with your lunar fingers
ignite my dormant sources of blaze
ripple my surface and taste my mood
search me with your radar eyes
sprinkle me with shiny stardust
gathered for me in outer space.

Reach deep into me until you recognize
the shape of my heart and the glow of my soul
awaken me from my dreamy slumber
make me rise as your radiant goddess
out of the eon loaded sacred waters
which remember our every passage.

The times are ripe for a new collision
let the world shudder to the sizzling sound
produced by the impact of our fusion.
Let us savour then the sweetness of being
when nights and days dance in perfect harmony
and our love expands along the paths of eternity.

*

© Copyright 2009 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2009-10-28 07:18 PM


Margharita,

I agree, “Bring it on!”

Oh, yes, let the celestial union of hearts and the mystical touch of the moon’s fingers and the spiritual rise of perfect harmony begin! What an extremely moving piece!

Thank you for sharing, Big Smiles and God bless,

-Bob


unboundpoetess
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2 posted 2009-10-28 07:36 PM


You carry me on words each time you utter ink.

Love,
Heather

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2009-10-28 08:01 PM


What a beauty, Margherita!!
The thought of it, makes my heart soar, and my eyes light up.

You really captured the moment as well as the emotions,
real and true love doesn't get any better!!

Just Beautiful,  in every way!!!

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4 posted 2009-10-29 03:26 AM


You captivate me when you write like this.

A

nourzihane
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5 posted 2009-10-29 04:35 AM


My dearest freind

With all the love we meet ..
We Renew our hope ..
We pick a flower from your full garden..
With Beauty and creativity ..
For smell a perfume of your words..
And for see the beauty of your letters..
I came here to learn finest arts with your
speciale pen..

thank you
Nourzihane

pls check your email

[This message has been edited by nourzihane (10-29-2009 06:54 AM).]

AncientHippie
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6 posted 2009-10-29 08:55 AM


Beautiful poem, and perfect picture, Margherita.  I was born a Moonchild, and the full moon always calls me to dance beneath her beams.  Sensuous piece, well written.  Thanks.
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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7 posted 2009-10-29 09:15 AM


Such a beautiful poem... and the picture makes a perfect presentation! *S*
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8 posted 2009-10-29 02:31 PM


hello margherita, the poem is sensual and the sensations after the touch me gradually represent spirituality and a kind of extraordinary fusion, this is so divine and raising, I enjoyed very much.
regards
yann

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Gaia
9 posted 2009-10-29 04:53 PM


What a stunning photo!
And the write is no less so....

Margherita
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10 posted 2009-10-30 01:25 PM


Thank you, my dear Poet friends, I very much enjoyed all of your loving replies.

Love,
Margherita

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11 posted 2009-10-30 07:39 PM


"The times are ripe for a new collision
let the world shudder to the sizzling sound
produced by the impact of our fusion."

~ Yeppers! You most assuredly are pip's Cosmic Love Queen! This was absolutely breathtakingly BEE-UTE-i-FULL!!!


Linda AT

Margherita
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12 posted 2009-10-31 05:14 AM


Linda Angelo Terrestre, to read your warm reply first thing in the morning is wonderfully uplifting my dear! Thank you!

Have a great week-end!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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