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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2009-10-28 10:17 AM



Take my hand
And I will walk with you
Take my secrets
And you will get my truth
Take my lips
And you will hear my sighs
Take my body
And you will touch my heart
Take my tears
And you will heal my soul


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AncientHippie
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since 2009-10-15
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow
1 posted 2009-10-28 10:20 AM


Beautiful sentiment, Lori.  This one has the feel of a aged, embroidered sampler, like our grandmothers had hanging of the parlour wall.  Inspiring.
Thanks,
Jim

Sutra 30: Language reflects the Truth of one’s Reality: listen carefully when others speak.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2009-10-28 10:24 AM


Thank you, Jim, bless your heart~L
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-10-28 01:01 PM


ms LG..when you let this kind of ink out you remind me of a dancer..lovely work
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2009-10-28 01:09 PM


D-tap or ballet?~L
Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
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Kansas USA
5 posted 2009-10-29 11:10 AM


Just take me as I am!

Wow!

Shenachie

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2009-10-29 07:00 PM


Nice...James
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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Watertown, NY
7 posted 2009-10-29 10:02 PM


Absolutely LOVED It!

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2009-10-30 03:50 PM


s1nfully_1nn0c3nt-Thanks~L

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