Open Poetry #45 |
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Take Me |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere ![]() |
Take my hand And I will walk with you Take my secrets And you will get my truth Take my lips And you will hear my sighs Take my body And you will touch my heart Take my tears And you will heal my soul |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Beautiful sentiment, Lori. This one has the feel of a aged, embroidered sampler, like our grandmothers had hanging of the parlour wall. Inspiring. Thanks, Jim Sutra 30: Language reflects the Truth of one’s Reality: listen carefully when others speak. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you, Jim, bless your heart~L |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms LG..when you let this kind of ink out you remind me of a dancer..lovely work |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
D-tap or ballet?~L |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Just take me as I am! Wow! Shenachie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Absolutely LOVED It! I Thought of You Today, |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt-Thanks~L |
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