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Poignant Moments |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Poignant moments Fill my eyes And agonize Down my cheeks Skin Too thin On my sleeve Takes it to Heart Empathy hums To the tune of Joy moistened Revelation Think what I want I am what I feel For those moments Too real |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lg..sounds like a bit of glow from some distant day dream...I always enjoy when a woman wears her favorite poignant. |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
A very nice piece. Well done. Arana Darkwolf |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is absolutely gorgeous. Welcome to Pip! Love, Margherita |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
I loved this. I spent too many years rationalizing my feelings and it is good just to feel. Thanks for sharing! Louise |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Lori, another excellent vignette of sensitivity and feeling/yearning and wishing. Forgive me if I do not comment on all your wonderful pieces, as time and family constraints preclude detailed comments, but I do read them all. You go, girl. I love your words and your outlook. Thank you Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jim.~L |
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