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Open Poetry #45
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naturegirl
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since 2009-09-30
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England
0 posted 2009-10-27 08:38 PM


smiling mouth
deadly gape
primed to
receive bounty
from plentiful
serene seas
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AncientHippie
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow
1 posted 2009-10-29 08:41 AM

Clever and very visual, Naturegirl.  Has the feel of a well crafted haiku, but not.  Nicely done.
Jim

Sutra 30: Language reflects the Truth of one’s Reality: listen carefully when others speak.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment
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