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Thin Air And Silence
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Thin Air And Silence |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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I Demanding Constantly curious Of whims and fancy I dress up in mother clothes And dance a parody ‘round reality I slip out of shoes That never really fit And wiggle bare toes In the muck A playground sky Scattered with clouds Toys for my imagination Sweet breezes caress Tender nodding from the trees They bounce shadows On a lonely wall Making faces Making friends Out of thin air And silence |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Oh! I very much enjoyed this.  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Kaoru- thank YOU so much for letting me know~L |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
When you are good you are good. Another gem. latearrival |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
latearrival You are most generous in your praise! I am humbled. ~L |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
really likr this one, it goes well with a new abstract painting I put up in my bedroom tonight. Good write, thanks for the read |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lg..you found those shoes again? but the dancing is always a perfect fit |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Nice, Lori. What an excellent page from a childhood scrapbook! I especially like "...dance a parody ‘round reality" Many thanks, Jim Sutra 8: Faith is not an alternative to thought: the one excludes the other. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
martiniat8-I'm really glad you're enjoying my work~L __________________________________________ Dark Stranger-I have found I dance best in bare feet~L _________________________________________ AncientHippie~yes, the roots of that one go back farther than I'm willing to tell...  ~L |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
This very much reminded me of my own childhood. Making friends with the wind, the trees, and the butterflies. Thank you for this little piece of nostalgia. Arana Darkwolf |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Arana Darkwolf You are most welcome~L |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I enjoy your poetry a lot - it seems as if your words speak to me. Alison |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
What a lovely childhood vignette! Thanks for sharing, Shenachie |
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