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Open Poetry #45
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
0 posted 2009-10-25 12:31 PM




Battle weary
Too tired
Uninspired
I retreat
Defeated
To my fate
Burning Dreams
At the stake
© Copyright 2009 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
1 posted 2009-10-25 06:56 PM

LOVE the look, and brevity of this and ties in the season too. An under appreciated read. Bravo!
rachaelfuchsberger
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2 posted 2009-10-25 08:18 PM

I agree. Brava!

Arana Darkwolf
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2009-10-26 10:04 AM

Thanks you two, I really appreciate your words of confidence~L
Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
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Kansas USA
4 posted 2009-10-28 10:39 PM

Did a good night's sleep change this?  Just asking...

I've been bone weary--

Yep--I've let go at times

Still absorbing this

Shenachie
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