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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2009-10-25 12:46 PM



It’s on the tip of my tongue
In the back of my mind
Beyond my reach
Out of my control
Too close for comfort

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (10-26-2009 09:46 AM).]

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rachaelfuchsberger
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1 posted 2009-10-25 01:35 PM


Exactly.

Arana Darkwolf

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2009-10-25 02:39 PM


Were we separated at birth?~LOL!!! You make me want to tell you how sorry I am you can relate to my poetry. ~L
rachaelfuchsberger
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3 posted 2009-10-25 08:20 PM


LoL. I think we may just be like souls. I am young (I'll be 24 in December) but I've got a bit of an old soul, and am going through a lot right now, so I am finding it unnervingly easy to relate to sad poetry.

Arana Darkwolf

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4 posted 2009-10-26 07:12 AM


ms LG..that hair on the back of the neck stuff..makes one move more quickly and feel more alive..kewl stuff ms
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
5 posted 2009-10-26 10:01 AM


for the Deer in season perhaps....L
Bridget Shenachie
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6 posted 2009-10-28 10:42 PM


Smiling here
at your poem
and the comments.

I forgot what
I was supposed
to worry about!

Shenachie

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