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Fallen Moths
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Fallen Moths |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Like moths to the flame Her words were drawn to his brilliance They touched and tickled His light As she tossed them To him in the night Whispering from her wildest Dreams To his imparted Highway consciousness Streaming Praying The morning dew Doesn’t glisten On fallen Moths (devils tower) series |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your devil whispers with an enticement that only maniacs might know...  I know such devils.  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sunshine-Devils? Do tell!~L |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am loving your style, brief, concise, and very easily seen images and scenes. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I wonder what moths taste like... I did smell moth balls once..oh...can't say that I guess.. enjoyed your serving here ms |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Mysteria-Thank you for your most complementary critique, I appreciate you taking the time and for sharing it with me~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
D-LOL! I would assume moths are at their best fresh~L |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Dear Lori, This is yet another work of art. I love the way this series has the feel of a black and white snapshot, photographed through moon lighted gauze, to give us a sometimes enigmatic glimpse into a very sensitive and creative mind. Well done, much enjoyed. Jim Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jim! You called my work "Art"!!!That felt really good, thanks!~L |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wince! You write the truth! Shenachie |
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