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Open Poetry #45

Untitled 10/24/2009

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2009-10-24 09:51 AM

I once let the dog
out
of the house
only to find it on the doorstep.
I once let the cat
out
of the bag
and it never returned.

Chaotic_Soul
New Member

since 2009-10-23

Posts 8
Leon, GTO, Mexico

1 posted 2009-10-24 11:21 AM

It's short, but no need for it to be any longer. I really like this one. Great work that you have.

"A poet looks at the world the way a man looks at a woman." -Wallace Stevens

"A poet's autobiography is his poetry. Anything else is just a footnot

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2009-10-24 11:34 AM

Thanks! I don't really think my brain thinks longer thoughts than these.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2009-10-24 01:39 PM

I got that one and loved it! However, now I can't get that stupid song out of my head, "Who Let The Dog Out?"

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

4 posted 2009-10-24 06:40 PM

OH NO! j/k Thanks for reading as always

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

5 posted 2009-10-24 07:20 PM

I like it. I've let many cats out of many bags they just never seem to go back in.

Arana Darkwolf

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