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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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time traveler shadows are assumed to be invisible the sky was brilliantly bright with a few clouds over mer Les Saintes-Maries three small sail boats rode the waves alongside the green algae your bold brushstrokes captured the moment perfectly I stood as close as I dared, a shadow within the shadow of greatness for a moment, time stood suspended for both of us suddenly, a nearby gull made eye-contact with me, fluffed his feathers and flew off at that moment you turned your head and gazed in my direction the brisk breeze ruffled your hair as you held a filled paintbrush in mid-air, straining to discern the apparition before you but all too soon the moment slipped away and you turned your eyes back to the sea, blending blues and greens as only a master can do but as I turned to walk away, you shifted your gaze again and smiled, as if to say ~au revoir, madame~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh wow, what a captivating poem, Kacy. Every thought blends into one another, and takes on a life of it's own. Magical!!! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
"I stood as close as I dared, a shadow within the shadow of greatness"--my favorite lines. I love your way with words--you're not overly loquacious and your images pack a punch. Great writing. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Each poem of yours that I have the pleasure of reading, fills me with wonder. Kacy, you are a 'wonder'-ful poetess. I stand in awe of your talent and your insightful, seeing eyes, heart, and soul. You are beautiful.   Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Kacy, for time traveling with us. This was a breathtaking vision. Probably you had this painting in your mind ... http://www.storyculture.com/blog/images/2008/11/03/vgogh_sailing_stmarie_blg.jpg I think the Master does get in touch with you, as he perceives your love so sincere and deep. Wonderful! Love, Margherita  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, Kacy, this is, I think, the very best of your Vincent poems! How many times have I said that of how many poems, I wonder, but each time, it is true. I only remembered to breathe several seconds after I had finished reading it. I am suuuuuuuuuuuure that he was aware of you down the time-travel line! What an exceptional experience it was to read this poem! This going to wear out from being read over and over again in my Midnitesun folder. I'm off to read it again. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lori, thank you for the "captivating" comment! Alwye, thanks dear lady, I have often been 'loquacious' in the past.  Linda, you are too kind, but I really enjoy having you visit my offerings! Yes, Margherita, you have the painting I was focusing on. I love that one! Diana, LOL, happy you enjoyed this. Van Gogh was incredibly versatile. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Time traveler indeed, capturing timeless moments allowing all to reach through the veil. Well done my friend! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks, Mr C! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Captivating. latearrival |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 martyjo, thanks! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oops, I forgot to say thank you to Margherita for showing us the picture. I hadn't seen this one of his. His paintings haves a magic that is as captivating as Kacy's poetry is about them. Thank you, Margherita. Owl |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Kacy, thank you very much for this one. I have no doubt whatsoever that you were seen by Vincent: he existed in his own Reality. Best regards Jim Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Loved every line of this!! *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Diana, I have a photo of that painting on my desktop, and stare at it frequently. Jim, thank you so much for that comment! Some people think I am a bit looney when I relate such paranormal 'adventures' (The Loon is my chosen spirit guide) Ruth, I am happy you read and enjoyed this. |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Maybe that is why the Masters are gifted so: they see the things we mere mortals cannot, and they translate it so well, as you did here with this wonderful work, t.bear |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
mix of the blue and green, my two favorite colors, blue- the color of creativity and green of love |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Kacy, I knew from the second stanza it was a painting, Or isn't it. This is very well ewpressed and constructed, I love the conversation and the presence of the poet...Thanks for a very enjoyable read. yann |
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