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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2009-10-28 10:01 AM




When  love comes calling
A precious garden blooms
Sweetly in the moonlight
Smiling stars wink
As delight dances
Effervescent steps
Around  my heart

(prophecy)


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AncientHippie
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow
1 posted 2009-10-28 10:25 AM


Lori, here is my wish that your delightful comes true for you.  This has the form and feel of a beautiful, yet robust, blossom.
Thank you.
Jim

Sutra 30: Language reflects the Truth of one’s Reality: listen carefully when others speak.
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2009-10-28 10:55 AM


Jim, My prophecy series are poems I have written in & about other times and places that have come to their true fruition later.
There is an implied "fufilled" in front of prophecy. Thank you for you sweet wishes for me~L

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-10-28 01:02 PM


ms lg..I would say he is lucky to have found your windows..can see the brim of a smile in this and some of the others
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2009-10-28 01:05 PM


D-Happy camper here~L
Margherita
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5 posted 2009-10-28 05:47 PM


Yes, those are some of the symptoms.

Very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

naturegirl
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6 posted 2009-10-28 09:09 PM


the first two lines made me smile because they are so true and glad they fulfilled themselves for you also...
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2009-10-28 09:26 PM


Margherita-thanks for the read~L
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naturegirl- Glad you REALLY liked this one! Thanks for letting me know!~L

Bridget Shenachie
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8 posted 2009-10-28 11:52 PM


I have seen a Plain Jane turned beautiful--simply by falling in love...it's happened to me.

Your poem describes that phenomenon so well!


Shenachie

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