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Tim
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0 posted 2009-10-20 10:39 PM



When I done gratuated from junior hi,
Momma up and said, Tim it's time fer goodbye,
Now that yer edukated, and age twenty-fore,
It's high on time son, to hit that there door.
Before ya go son, sum werds of advice,
Wash them big ears, and ya' always be nice,
She says one last thing, before I up and wents,
Practice safe lunch Tim, use them there condiments.

© Copyright 2009 Tim - All Rights Reserved
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latearrival
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2 posted 2009-10-21 02:37 AM


Funny!!!
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3 posted 2009-10-21 08:44 AM


I don't know what was in your box of cheerios this morning... but I hope you stocked up on that batch! LOL

*grinning*

AncientHippie
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4 posted 2009-10-21 08:51 AM


Great work, Tim.  Very much appreciated with my morning coffee, and yes...I'd love just a small bowlful of your breakfast cereal.
Cheers

Sutra 6: If your Path seems to be sprinkled with shards of glass, you should examine each shard to ensure it is not a diamond.

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2009-10-21 10:35 AM


are you my brother??

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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6 posted 2009-10-22 04:34 PM


I am just so glad you use your pen to doodle with in your spare time.  I had to come back to save this one Tim.  
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7 posted 2009-10-23 10:49 AM


Thanks for starting my day off with a smile, Tim.
                            Ida

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