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Thoughts of Flight |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
In my hermit’s cave, Not so dim and dank, Where I rant and rave; Where emotions sank. I look out at all Princes and peasants, And try to recall Where my life was spent. The bottom is close Barely a step now, For I sank not rose; I care not the how. A bird flies away From its roosting place To the mundane day, A pain I can’t face. Peasant and the King Neither rules the sky They can’t stop clocks ring Or tax birds that fly. Gloom Inspired by Zhang Jiuling 673 China |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
They can’t stop clocks ring Or tax birds that fly. How very true! I like this melancholy write, Gloomy one! *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a new favorite of yours for my library |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It was a pleasure reading your work again. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
boy, havent seen you in a long time, too long. I relate to your poem, but alas since i finally emerged from the hermit cave, my words and life have flown. I hope yours do as well. Great read! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"I look out at all Princes and peasants, And try to recall Where my life was spent." Sometimes I wonder if we all don't in some ways try to recall where life has passed us by at. A pleasure to read you again Proff. ~D |
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