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Slow River |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Flow down the river, the weight lifting from your chest slow and calm look to the right through the thinly cut woods and there runs a stream fast and bright bathed in light rushing rapids through a shallow brook the shallows the shallows and sharp edged rocks should we switch to the shift of another lover another one swift the only thought being if there where would we spill where would we spill and so look ahead from this slow turning tube even if we linger in the bend it is the more beautiful view |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Brad..can see some of what you were talking about...I spend hours close to a river of sand and watch it daily to see the changes.. enjoyed it guy |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed flowing down the river with your elegant poem, thanks for the poem and sharing beauty of nature and soul, regards yann |
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