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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-10-16 08:06 AM

it is now, the sorrows of night are but residue
and my leather weeps of the gypsy mist
it is now she is a dance at brim of glances
with her leaves she tells of my secret dreams

I no longer feel her words at my heart ends
she has bared her back to the sunder man's blade
and frolicked wanton against his knivery
she has been the willow that wept her saliva

in the valley of the walking men she was a vixen
that leaned her limbs across their thigh skins
and touched them deeper then their souls thought
she was the hollow sound of moans in the night

as she danced her branches against eve and wind

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daark (do of glass)

Tweet45
New Member

since 2009-10-15

Posts 7

1 posted 2009-10-16 08:17 AM

Beautiful. Enjoyed very much so.

dragngrl28
Junior Member

since 2009-10-12

Posts 45
Texas, USA

2 posted 2009-10-16 12:40 PM

When I read the poem I went two ways-one was mother nature and the other was a woman with sexual freeedom (or a wanton woman). What a striking image. Did you make the picture?

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2009-10-16 02:33 PM

perfect
pitch
you've nailed her to a T

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2009-10-16 03:22 PM

Ds
Once again you have displayed your mastery~L

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2009-10-16 04:34 PM

Thanks so much tweet..

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ms dragon, thank you for seeing both sides of it...I found the photo actually.

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ms inki...thanks for climbing up and sitting for a moment

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ms LG, thank you lady for the eyes

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-11-08 08:54 AM

Wow! What a discovery I just made!

quote:
and touched them deeper than their souls thought
she was the hollow sound of moans in the night

as she danced her branches against eve and wind

Awesome!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2009-11-10 04:20 PM

Excellent photo to go with this poem. You should add more photos into your posting! It shows that you have a talent for picking them.

ARCTIC WIND

Callie Carroll
New Member

since 2009-11-15

Posts 4
USA

8 posted 2009-11-15 03:23 AM

Very beautiful, visually and aurally. Extremely skilled, but the skill is an undercurrent to the message.
Thanks,
Cal

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2009-11-15 06:48 AM

ms mar, thank you lady friend

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aw, thanks amigo

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CC...thanks and welcome to the PIPzoo

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

10 posted 2009-11-18 07:29 AM

niiice

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

11 posted 2009-11-18 09:37 PM

Whoa I'm blown away with this piece. Bravo Sir. The last stanza is my favorite.

-Zach

AncientHippie
Member

since 2009-10-15

Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow

12 posted 2009-11-19 08:41 AM

Beautiful work here, DS. Another perfect exemplar of your art. Thank you.
Jim

"We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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