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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Oh, you know me... thanks for checking in I... I am the camel in the desert that just keeps going on always thirsty, hungry, hopeful and strong oasis? oh, they come and go just a mirage the wavy massage for the journey a ho from the tip-top of my camel top camel-eyed camel-high ride I enjoy the view of a cloudless desert blue sky view to the distant dunes walking to my camel tune the view is always a beautiful hue over rick-rocks through shifting sand-clocks under the light of noon oh, you know me where all the world's a stage the actors the plays all revolve and... rearrange and I I, the narrator an actor with range delivering his monologue soliloquy standing in the key-light spotlight moonbeam page |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Interesting construction here, Kenneth. I love the syncopation, mimicking the sway of the camel. I also appreciate the point of view here: sort of a je ne sais quoi, that speaks of nonchalance, but is, in fact very connected. Great read. Peace Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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