there are doors to be opened

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Open Poetry #45

there are doors to be opened

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2009-10-14 07:14 AM

there are doors to be opened,
doors when you look at me
and share deep portions of the day,
doors when you don’t listen to me
and make my words to be reconsidered,
there are doors to be opened,
the ones of your perfumed skin
in the gentlenesss of an unknown bed,
and to know caresses are a future,
fruits to be warmly picked in human nights,
there are doors in your hands
when they spin around evidences
and make believe in abstract materials,
sweet, sweet doors like no other ones
when you are the heart opening girl

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2009-10-14 10:47 AM

and to know caresses are a future,
fruits to be warmly picked in human nights,

When I read the title, I was thinking about the lady and the tiger... but these possibilities are all positive. *S* Beautiful work!

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

2 posted 2009-10-14 03:02 PM

there are doors in your hands
when they spin around evidences
and make believe in abstract materials,
sweet, sweet doors like no other ones
when you are the heart opening girl
____________

okay yann..

this IS my favorite (and it's a door poem)

it's beautiful

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2009-10-15 06:42 PM

Nice...James

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2009-10-16 11:53 AM

thanks suthern for teaching something I didn't know about the lady and the tiger.

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2009-10-16 11:54 AM

thanks Shellie for the kind and supportive comment.

best wishes

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2009-10-16 11:54 AM

Thanks James.

yann

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