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anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
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0 posted 2009-10-14 11:37 AM



I remember
you as clear as day standing in the garden
you said, you were going to be a soldier boy when you grew up
standing in the garden with your toy rifle at your side
and tin hat on your head “I remember.

I remember,
how you couldn't have a bath without your little yellow ducks
bobbing in the bubbles, you were,
just a small little chap not much taller than my hip
but you were always my brave little soldier boy "I remember.

I remember
that the day dawned, and the time had come
Just another soldier boy to fight until the job was done
my little boy now fighting by god side, and all I have
are two little ducks to keep your memory alive you see!
I remember
Annie
12-10-2009

[This message has been edited by anniepimm54 (10-16-2009 10:52 AM).]

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brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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nowhere and everywhere
1 posted 2009-10-14 03:36 PM



annie

this touched me very much..

just beautiful  




hafrock
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 34
India
2 posted 2009-10-14 03:46 PM


There is more to the ducks than mere memories..God bless..very touching annie
anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 110

3 posted 2009-10-16 10:51 AM


Thank you i am glad you like it
We should never forget the ones that are lost

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