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2islander2
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0 posted 2009-10-14 07:15 AM



Door, what door ?
the one you slammed with your heart
made me blind for twenty years,
door, what door ?
the one that kept me down,
the one that locks the sky,
I saw incredible skylines in your eyes,
door, what door ?
you made me blind babe,
you made me blind for twenty years.

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brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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1 posted 2009-10-14 02:32 PM



yann

twenty years is a long time

this was kind of sad



but I still liked it


GBride
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since 2009-07-02
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2 posted 2009-10-16 01:49 AM


She must have really been special to you.
An interesting write

2islander2
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3 posted 2009-10-16 11:57 AM


Hello Shellie, yes it is a very long time, let us call that a depression, but sometimes we can't avoid that because we have not consciuosness of it, until someone or time helps you.

thanks alot for the commen-t.

yann

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-10-16 11:58 AM


thanks Gbride, during a long long time I thought that I really have spend the appiest time of my life with her, it was like an addiction to my thoughts.

best wishes

yann

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