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Open Poetry #45

Door, what door ?

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2009-10-14 07:15 AM

Door, what door ?
the one you slammed with your heart
made me blind for twenty years,
door, what door ?
the one that kept me down,
the one that locks the sky,
I saw incredible skylines in your eyes,
door, what door ?
you made me blind babe,
you made me blind for twenty years.

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

1 posted 2009-10-14 02:32 PM

yann

twenty years is a long time

this was kind of sad

but I still liked it

GBride
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since 2009-07-02

Posts 538

2 posted 2009-10-16 01:49 AM

She must have really been special to you.
An interesting write

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2009-10-16 11:57 AM

Hello Shellie, yes it is a very long time, let us call that a depression, but sometimes we can't avoid that because we have not consciuosness of it, until someone or time helps you.

thanks alot for the commen-t.

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2009-10-16 11:58 AM

thanks Gbride, during a long long time I thought that I really have spend the appiest time of my life with her, it was like an addiction to my thoughts.

best wishes

yann

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