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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-10-13 03:58 PM

My eyes are like hands, firm, yet tender skinned,
Holding you up from sinking softly, down
And absorbing the senses taken in,
As feet remain planted on solid ground
Countless sights, and pleasures the eyes will bring,
Empowered by sight alone to touch thee
Held transfixed by a gaze unrelenting,
Yet so tragic, that the hands cannot see
The imprint of thy image, volumes speak,
Of touches that I can furtively steal
Across time, distance, a sensory feast,
Through the eyes, my flesh can faithfully feel

My eyes caress like hands across your skin
Let me feel you like that, and take you in

hafrock
Junior Member

since 2009-10-10

Posts 34
India

1 posted 2009-10-13 05:25 PM

So tender, so lovable..so many things the eyes only could do..way to go chalmette..pleasure to read

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-10-13 05:32 PM

Thank you hafrock.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2009-10-13 07:11 PM

that was drop jaw awesome dude! That is not what a woman thinks a man is feeling when he is undressing her with his eyes. Your poem draws a line in the sand that makes a distinction between seeing and touching as clear as making love and having sex. Bravo!

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-10-14 08:24 AM

Wow, thank you so much Lori. That's exactly what I was hoping someone would see in this.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-10-14 09:34 AM

Yet so tragic, that the hands cannot see
The imprint of thy image, volumes speak,
Of touches that I can furtively steal
Across time, distance, a sensory feast,
Through the eyes, my flesh can faithfully feel

My eyes caress like hands across your skin
Let me feel you like that, and take you in

This is so lovely I can't find breath, much less words... it feels... reverent... and it's with reverence I read.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2009-10-14 12:10 PM

C G- You wrote it so good there was no other way to feel about it (for me) Your last line made my whole being go "I want to be looked at like that."

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