Open Poetry #45 |
Do You Love Me? |
Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Do you love me? “Do you love me?” she asked. “I love you.” she replied. “How much?” she wanted to know. “More.” she replied. “More than what?” she questioned on. “More than I know. More than I have words for. More than my heart can hold. More than enough to last a lifetime. Do I love you? Yes, I do!” She was quiet, not a question left in her head As the answer settled in And she realized… “That’s just how much I love you.” She said at last. Her mother held her close And softly whispered, “I know.” |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is delightful and heartwarming. *S* Welcome to Passions!! |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Welcome to PiP! Your poem is wonderful--so good to hear something good said about mother-daughter relationships. This poem expressed such love that I think that my mother felt the hug! Looking for many more of your postings here. Louise Ryan |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks for the welcome, glad to finally be here...between cold feet and lead bottom, I didn't think I'd ever make it. Hope you like the rest of my menagerie of musings. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome [finally] to Passions, Lori! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lori, Warm, heartfelt write, well done... BC |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks, BC. |
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dragngrl28 Junior Member
since 2009-10-12
Posts 45Texas, USA |
As a mother this poem really touched my heart. After 2 boys I had my little girl 7 months ago and although I love them all there is something special about the mother-daughter bond. Lovely poem |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl stuff ms lg.. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks for taking a peek, Your Darkness |
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