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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Your face fills my heart as I wake each morn Before these eyes open or thoughts are born There is you, there is want. But a cold bed Stretches at my side - you're just in my head Your hands give me shivers, as in the shower I turn to hold you, anxious to devour The pleasures I know you offer to me But I’m alone and my life is empty. Your arms coax me away from kitchen sink With warm breath on my neck I cannot think You star in my dreams, give song to my soul You mold me, complete me - you make me whole I’d sell my soul for the taste of your kiss You feel so real, how can you not exist? |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
I’d sell my soul for the taste of your kiss You feel so real, how can you not exist? _________ those damn ghosts  enjoyed this |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This is powerful suthern. Very warm in here. |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Somehow, after seeing your picture, I can't imagine you being alone unless you want to be. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bittersweet to the bone. I loved it! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
brneyedgrly: I'm glad you enjoyed! *S* A vivid imagination and a boring life... ghosts are inevitable. *G* Thank you! *S* Chalmette Guy: Thank you so much! *S* Warm is good... right? LOL GBride: I thank you, kind sir. *S* Lori: Thank you very much! *S* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love your response to Shellie. But a boring life can bring about some wonderful fantasy~~ shouldn't be laughing slightly at the thought but I have that same very boring personal life. have a hug...and hope you are well  M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern...you know so well what we do with our ghosts and how they seem to enjoy us exercising them.. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
yeah, this is exactly the kind of thing I just wrote about in my poem Cat Nap, and I hadn't even read this yet. This feeling must be contagious right now, something in the air, like a Cold Moon |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Wow, I feel so much from this poem, so intense, and such longing, these thing I often write about and know of. I hear you, and understand this poem so well.. Very nice indeed, Tracey |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
nakdthoughts: Laugh away, my friend... it's better than crying! *S* Thank you so much... and hugs back to you! *S* DS: LOL @ exercising our ghosts... now that's a workout plan I could embrace! LOL Thank you! martini: I'll look for your poem. *S* Thanks for the read! *S* Tracey: Getting a wow from you makes my day... thank you so much! *S* |
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