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Open Poetry #45

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shalisadefa
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since 2009-08-13

Posts 114

0 posted 2009-10-11 04:15 PM

You .. whistleblower
who brought tidings of cheating lovers
you .. who’s integrity was perceived as foul
who chose to act on impulse not on rational

you should know
you dearest most evil of messengers
the other half of the other woman
you who became the fall guy

I found me … because of you

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 360
New Orleans

1 posted 2009-10-11 07:50 PM

Beautifully captured.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2009-10-11 08:08 PM

shalisadefa - first poem I've read of yours, and glad I did...

BC

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2009-10-12 06:12 AM

yes, I agree with Bill.. a great first poem of yours I have read... welcome to our pages blue.. hope to read more of your great work..

bisous de Sydney
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

shalisadefa
Member

since 2009-08-13

Posts 114

4 posted 2009-10-12 04:39 PM

to Bill and Ronience,
Thanks for your encouraging words.

dragngrl28
Junior Member

since 2009-10-12

Posts 45
Texas, USA

5 posted 2009-10-14 11:40 PM

I can imagine this being read aloud with emphasis on the yous in the poem. Enjoyed.

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