navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » Wish
Open Poetry #45
Post A Reply Post New Topic Wish Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Inspired-8
Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2009-10-10 11:23 PM



Wishing on a star
Longing for the love
Wonder where you are
So distant far above

Wishing by the moon
Asking if the day
Ever coming soon
Love fills my heart to stay


Hoping in the night
Tomorrow brings the one
Shimmering starry light
Love and joy shall come

© Copyright 2009 Victor Duna - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2009-10-10 11:32 PM


Inspired....

For as old as I am, I never
not want to wish upon a star...

it is a childhood habit...

one I intend to keep forever.

Thank you so much for commenting
on my poem.


suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
2 posted 2009-10-12 10:54 AM


Wishing and hoping keep me going. *S* I like this very much.
brneyedgrly
Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
3 posted 2009-10-12 10:12 PM



hope your wish comes true  


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2009-10-15 06:22 PM


Enjoyed...James
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » Wish

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary