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shalisadefa
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since 2009-08-13
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0 posted 2009-10-14 05:07 PM



you who maintain such high standards
you think you’ve got it made
that you are so much better looking
and I won’t last a day

you the one I was looking for
you think life owes you all
that you are as eligible as they come
and I will take the fall
..
..
you self-righteous b*st*rd
master of the blame game
when push comes to shove
you’re the first to point the finger
and the next to pull the trigger
you think so highly of you
you ego centred sob
keep on playing cheating games
the one who’s free is me


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(came out more agressive than it was supposed to be
let me know what you think)


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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2009-10-15 03:22 PM


shalisadefa - I agree, somewhat agressive writing, but it does help to get it out...

BC

shalisadefa
Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114

2 posted 2009-10-15 04:14 PM



You know you're right. I'll promise you'll get to know the sunny side of me as well. (smile)

thks


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2009-10-15 06:25 PM


pretty good hunk of agression...James
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