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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-10-10 02:21 AM



the joy of discovery


i found chocolate
hidden high
in the cupboard

i had to tippy toe peek
but i found it
and it's all mine

-

Alison

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1 posted 2009-10-10 02:54 AM


Very cute.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2009-10-10 09:26 AM


yum!! I have chocolate too, but it's not hidden... you can come raid my pantry any time Ali-girl - mmmm chocolate and jetlag, a good combination!  


Bisous de Sydney
RDB


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3 posted 2009-10-10 12:22 PM



adorable..chocolate fixes a lot of things




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4 posted 2009-10-10 02:44 PM


Oh, how I love to find chocolate in my house. although, I would make sure all chocolate is left seen. No chocolate lasts  in my home LOL


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5 posted 2009-10-10 08:29 PM


I love chocolate.
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6 posted 2009-10-11 03:58 AM


simply wonderful Alison, like a kid discovering a treasure, your poem made me smile cleverly, I will think of it next time I commit a chocolate sin. (give me inspiration this one)

have a nice day

yann

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7 posted 2009-10-11 04:26 PM


deja vu

how nice!

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8 posted 2009-10-11 05:26 PM


Oh, how I loved this! So cute and yummy!

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9 posted 2009-10-11 05:28 PM


Oh, how I love surprises and chocolate is the yummiest!!
Very special!

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10 posted 2009-10-11 05:30 PM


Oh, how I love surprises and chocolate is the yummiest! Just fabulous!

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11 posted 2009-10-11 08:11 PM


Alison - a'hhhhhh h'aaaaaa, little did you know that BC was there first and tried the chocolate before you, hehehe...

BC

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12 posted 2009-10-12 10:59 AM


LOL... Hoping you savor your discovery... as I do the smile you gave. *S*
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13 posted 2009-10-12 12:59 PM


LOL, this was adorable Alison. Thanks for the smile.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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14 posted 2009-10-12 01:08 PM


This was very cute and I luuuuuve chocolate. In fact I wouldn't mind some chocolate right about now


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15 posted 2009-10-12 10:54 PM


Heheheh! Another chocoholic!  I have a couple in my house, too.  Doesn't matter where I stash my cache...they always find it.  When I bought Halloween candy today, I only needed two packages because we are out of the way.  The other five bags are for the gremlins who live here.  

Karen

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Life is like a box of...

well, nevermind. lol

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17 posted 2009-10-14 02:22 AM


heeheeeee.

lucky you, if only it were a freshly made roast beef sandwich.

those are good.
Paul

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18 posted 2009-10-15 12:57 PM


Ahhh, my chocolate loving friends (all except for Paul - a roast beef sandwich?  I love them too, but not ones stashed in the cupboard ~ sheese, what's wrong with you, man?).  I delighted in each of your replies and would have shared the chocolate if I had enough - honest, I would have.  Well, maybe I would have.  Most likely, I would not have shared it at all, but let's go with the might have shared it.

Love to you and thank you for reading my poetry.

A

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19 posted 2009-10-15 10:55 AM


Alison,  Don't eat it!!!!!    I remember as a child finding chocolate in the cupboard, My mom was hiding it in the medicine.  I found it though,    I sure remember that chocolate..... Turns out that there is a medicine made of chocolate.  
EXLAX  Laxitive.  

cleans you right out.   yum  yum.

Be very careful what you wish for.
Tracey  

T.

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20 posted 2009-10-15 06:26 PM


Hope its dark chocolate...James
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
21 posted 2009-10-16 11:19 AM


Not to worry, Tracey.  No fake chocolate in my house - only the good stuff.

And James, nope ... no dark chocolate in my house.  I'll leave that to you and my Mom.

Thank you both.

Alison

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22 posted 2009-10-18 09:12 PM


Can I have some please
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23 posted 2009-10-19 06:25 AM


oh that Rick! he always wants, wants, wants! LOL

Just came back for another fix of chocolate my lovely Ali-girl ...

Bisous de Sydney
RDB

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24 posted 2009-10-19 07:53 AM


Simple and direct, Alison.  Finely crafted work that brings back memories to all of us.  Thank you.
Jim

Sutra 3: See your reality for what it is, not for what you think it is: this is the first step to making your reality what you wish it to be.
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