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martiniat8
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0 posted 2009-10-09 03:42 PM


(any and all written continuation is welcome and pre-approved)

So many clouds
too many clouds

and they all have nothing to say

We seek to find that silver lining today

She puts the Brrr
in Brrr-radley

or maybe just the rrr
to purr

He saw his influence
on many a page

his cause
to pause

and view
the gray

in all perspective
he knew

and knows

she lingers

and we
linger

to say...

"Can't you see beauty in the gray?" ~Margherita
"In "Her warm embrace"? ~Bill Charles

Someone "is trying to make an honest mistake" ~Michael Peters

[This message has been edited by martiniat8 (10-10-2009 12:08 PM).]

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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 360
New Orleans
1 posted 2009-10-10 03:15 AM


Her voice puts ey
In obey

She makes it so tempting
With the voice shes hinting

The signs so obvious
Yet not quite so blunt

Perhaps it is not the capture
But the hunt

That keeps us going...

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
2 posted 2009-10-10 04:08 AM


Thank you,
oh dear mistress,

For the listless memories you've planted in our minds.
For the inspiration without preparation...

And the countless times you asked us, "Why not?" ~Ethan Holmes

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
3 posted 2009-10-10 12:07 PM


"The hart, he loves his hill
the hare loves his nest
and The Lady
loves her will' M.Goose

love in a woman comes from the all-
deep informs mind it's HIM
that message received by a womans brain that's intouch
with the senses she was born with~
a womans love
as for a babe forever and ever mother ever
before that comes a loved man - love- true with lust and all-
she knows and follows her heart..

dies of loyalty,
as all things break, hatch,
for reason or for treason
yet nothing lost
when loves given-
seen:its the only gain...

but women, woman, not all are like - not all are like
M. Goose, and Hera was lied about.. "The Lady- Eternal Femme- is more easily understood, even in all her natural divinity
comprehended ,than typical modern .

I can't speak for others, my aims have been too too true but it's men mostly that

love the hunt--

love to me seats in a chair somewhere disguised
knows what floor he's on

knows how to build an elevator
or assemble any batch of paradox--

except needs me to translate the forest shapes
and shadows- feelings are things I know-
friends I understand from a-z and again.
Mode of communicate `absolute, comprehend.

I'm natural Peruvian cat
I'm a loyal spaniel
don't know what his name really is,
don't know why he aims a scope-
or whistles when he does

just happy when he pats my head or says good dog

but if he's my true love, he'll find me
and we'll be so warm~

learn a lot about life walking among
nothing but theories....


not the hunted but the founded" ~FRANCES Cosima

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