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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I guess I wanted you for your curves mostly how they fit my eyes and hands like too fast feels and I always did prefer that feeling to control of knowing how and when whatever would happen sometimes we were just the walls along alleys dark secret places behind the proper sided with our hands open we would strum the wind and listen to the moaning from belly place needing you said I was more of a thrill ride then a man something you needed to hold with white knuckles lest you got bucked off or slid under breathless and that it hurt sometimes how we fit so roughly sometimes we were just the smooth surface of windows wearing the moments of wind on our skin ends and keeping our embracing as some kind of dance lest we found ourselves like dogs glued like bookends and would be hesitant to admit it was what we had kneaded _____________ daark (do of water) |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Very interesting poem and the imagery was excellently portrayed, very well penned  Annie |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms annie |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey D-Man, Help, I can't stop yawning. Mornings should be outlawed and I bet they are in some countries. Anyway, beautiful .. suggestively erotic written with your very unique style. And you do have style! A |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
with our hands open we would strum the wind and listen to the moaning from belly place needing Words aren't necessary. But you sure are good with 'em! *S* Beautiful work! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..it is night somewhere and you are still up? thanks little one ___________ ms suthern , thanks lady friend for the smiles you bring |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
D ...like too fast feels and I always did prefer that feeling to control of knowing how and when whatever would happen-it speaks volumes~L |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lg..I wondered if you enjoyed haveing the key to the cuffs..thanks ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
When I read, I can feel the wind and the touch of leather and man. I like not reading your poetry for awhile because then I get to discover them. It's like a treasure hunt for me - I just have to be careful not to discover them all at once. Gluttony is a deadly sin - can't have sin now, can we. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..you smile me with your hunger..and yet I know how you hate oatmeal..thanks babe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, oatmeal... with butter. Good enough for me.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms sun...and some cinnamon too? Thanks lady friend |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
BUT ... no ding-danged lumps, by gosh! |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I do admire Your style here, Sir. Very discreetly erotic. Definitely enjoyed. Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Gourmet poem, no doubt! You know what? I want a smooth smooth cashmere cover which on one side has a silk patchwork, with your poems imprinted, to cuddle within. "How to keep warm" would be its name ... Quite a thought for early morning, don't you think? Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you little one _____________ ms berger, thank you ms for the read _____________ ms mar, thank you lady friend |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Thank you, DS. Just what I needed on this bright Monday morning...a good earthy dose of the Dark Stranger. Very clever choice of words in several areas of this splendid work. Thanks, Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Humble thanks AH..Much appreciated your review |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
"more thrill ride than man". Wow, that put me in the way-back machine. I'm older and wiser now...more's the pity! Loved the feel of this one. Aenea If I don't say it...who will? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Morning..thank you so much..(love the bubble by the way) |
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