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Healing whispers of reality
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Healing whispers of reality |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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* * * Healing whispers of reality * * * Dawn’s pink cheeks leaned warm onto my eyes causing me to sigh. A veil of melancholy clung to my thoughts like a shred of morning fog entangled in willow boughs. Quietly you came to me with whispers of reality to lift my chin so caringly. A few tears fell and gathered within the palms of your hands, where they froze into crystal beads eternalized by your sidereal gaze. I wear them now linked together by the unalterable wire of our love. Their light reverberates in our eyes to eternally symbolize the oneness of our hearts even though at times we roam around different stars. Our inner senses will always show the right way leading back home to enjoy the fruits of our own Eden in the sweetest awareness of our souls. * * * |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
the oneness of our hearts even though at times we roam around different stars. Oh, lady... this is absolutely wonderful!! Longing, hope... and a deep appreciation for what was, regardless of what is... you've woven them all masterfully! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, you weave such lovely fabric in your love songs...enjoyed you here dear one |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Gorgeous writing Margherita! ~ Excellent penning.  ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, This is very good work on this poem. Love Bobby |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You have such a beautiful heart, and it shines so brightly through your poetry. Every word radiates with a certain sparkle!!! You lend so much goodness and grace to these blue pages, Margherita~ Lovely poem, as always~ Hugs~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
What a surreal embodiment of love and caring. Thank you for sharing, -Bob |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I enjoyed all of your most kind replies, my dear Poet friends. Thank you all! Love, Margherita  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
these are my thoughts rita.. gentle, bittersweet, beautiful I love your poetry ((and you)) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Margherita where they froze into crystal beads eternalized by your sidereal gaze. thanks for the magical verse and the sertenity of words. I love the title too. have a nice day yann |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - sweet write, as sweet as you... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Hello Margareta i enjoyed here really i like your writing thank you my dear love nourzihane |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Margherita. This is such a perfect little poem. It speaks volumes about the writer, and establishes the relationship of which you write as something that we all should hope, and strive, for. Thank you for this gem. Sutra 5: Public self-criticism does not brighten one’s Spark of Brahman: it merely feeds one’s narcissism. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maga Margherita, your quill drips some of the finest ink known to poetkind. ~ Gracious, cosmic, divine, creative ~ and infinitely loving. Love you, my friend,  Linda Angelo Terrestre |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's nice to find your most loving replies, dear Poet friends, after my short absence. Thank you all so very much! Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Margherita~~ You have strung together such beautiful words here. Your poetry lights up the page. Just lovely, dear one~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lady Margherita, I have no adequate words to describe how lovely this poem is on so many levels. Your tenderness and devotion shine through every phrase, even when melencholy. Thank you for sharing this gem. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Lori and dear Kacy, for appreciating my little poem. You are so kind and warm my heart. Love, Margherita  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Margherita, this is simply said, just beautiful writing my friend, very much enjoyed it. Rick |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Our inner senses will always show the right way leading back home to enjoy the fruits of our own Eden in the sweetest awareness of our souls. You NEVER fade at the finish, Margherita! Wonderful! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - very tender and warm write. Well done... BC |
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