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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England 
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Walking beside you,discovering anew, Ancient paths,feet worn smooth, Stunted oaks,moss covered boulders, Woodland anenomes,abut bluebell glades, Tortured branches and twisted roots, Raining heavily,swollen brook below, Sparse green canopy up above, Folklore brought vividly to life, Your pleasure at my delight, Plain for all to see, You take my hand gently, Leading upwards into the fairytale. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful! I can almost see a picture in my mind. Welcome to PIP! |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
thank you so much. you can't know how much it means to me to have such a compliment made. you are so very kind. i wrote this a few months ago but it's as fresh in my mind as the day i wrote it. i don't know much about form, construction & frightening things like iambic? thinks i must read up on it before next attempt. thank you again.x |
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SA-Insomniac New Member
since 2009-10-05
Posts 1 |
that was breath taking i loved you imagery. hope to read more from you |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
Thank you, you're very kind. It is an actual place called Padley Gorge in the Peak District National Park in England. I wrote it after the first time I visited with my partner. |
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