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Open Poetry #45
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The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
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EL, Michigan
0 posted 2009-09-28 10:48 PM


Dark shadows circle
blue eyes as they permeate
indignation and disgust.
© Copyright 2009 Jill Slamka - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-29 05:54 AM

Very powerful, dear Jill, you caught this moment of clarity with sharpness.

Love,
Margherita
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-10-02 01:06 AM

This is haunting, hard to miss the raw emotional saddness.

You made quite an impact with so few words...
not an easy thing to do!
The Shadow in Blue
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3 posted 2009-10-04 07:34 PM

Gracias you two. It(the haiku) came from an angry/sad place. But it sure resulted in a poetic release. *cheeky grin*

Jill
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