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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477
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I am drawn with your wicked imaginings skin sinned brimstone zephyr sketched warm swept across dark waters of curve and nape and cleft burning down the temples in gardens of my deepest night striped with the laces of verdant uttering this parchment blushes her moan a slave to quilled religion I am baptized in tongues your exegetic doll swallowing puddles of your ink grant me the saliva of your poem words and I will writhe beneath them freedom is anathema pressed between your leather sealed in wetlocked wonder I will not be ransomed but revel in my chains H [This message has been edited by unboundpoetess (10-01-2009 06:27 PM).] |
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dickpoetry Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 89 |
great stuff. enjoy your bondage. freedom is highly overrated and is only lauded by the unknowing. dp |
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dickpoetry Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 89 |
nothing to criticize. you hide well what needs to be hidden. you reveal enough. good poem. better subject. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
grant me the saliva of your poem words and I will writhe beneath them freedom is anathema pressed between your leather sealed in wetlocked wonder These lines took my breath away H. I honestly think you keep topping yourself with each and every write. Wow. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hey there, it's great to find you here. Been awhile, and so worth the wait!! You're a wonderful poet, Lady~ |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
dp~ Thank you so much for reading.Nice to meet you here : ) JerBear Appreciate you, brother. You make me smile. Ms.Serenade Aw, you warm my heart! A joy to have you read me! L, H |
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