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unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
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0 posted 2009-10-01 02:39 PM


I am drawn with your wicked imaginings
skin sinned brimstone zephyr sketched
warm swept across dark waters
of curve and nape and cleft
burning down the temples

in gardens
of my deepest night

striped with the laces of verdant uttering
this parchment blushes her moan
a slave to quilled religion
I am baptized in tongues
your exegetic doll

swallowing puddles
of your ink

grant me the saliva of your poem words
and I will writhe beneath them
freedom is anathema
pressed between your leather
sealed in wetlocked wonder

I will not be ransomed
but revel in my chains
H

[This message has been edited by unboundpoetess (10-01-2009 06:27 PM).]

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dickpoetry
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since 2009-09-30
Posts 89

1 posted 2009-10-01 03:06 PM


great stuff. enjoy your bondage. freedom is highly overrated and is only lauded by the
unknowing.

dp

dickpoetry
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since 2009-09-30
Posts 89

2 posted 2009-10-01 03:09 PM


nothing to criticize. you hide well what needs to be hidden. you reveal enough.
good poem. better subject.

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
3 posted 2009-10-01 03:17 PM


grant me the saliva of your poem words
and I will writhe beneath them
freedom is anathema
pressed between your leather
sealed in wetlocked wonder


These lines took my breath away H.
I honestly think you keep topping yourself with each and every write. Wow.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2009-10-02 12:35 PM


Hey there, it's great to find you here.  Been awhile, and so worth the wait!!

You're a wonderful poet, Lady~

unboundpoetess
Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477

5 posted 2009-10-04 07:03 PM


dp~
Thank you so much for reading.Nice to meet you here : )

JerBear
Appreciate you, brother. You make me smile.

Ms.Serenade
Aw, you warm my heart! A joy to have you read me!

L,
H

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