Open Poetry #45 |
Sacred Love |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Bring back my sunshine, the brilliant hues of love, beaming glows of affection, across my sad, blue sky, Open your windows of the heart, softly flows the breeze of my words, like a beautiful violen being strummed, my hearts melody you hear, I dreamed of you last night, more than I ever have dreamed, we laughed in meadows of snow, running as children, smileing, Your handsome face I remember, frozen as in some still photo, captured in time for a memory, enjoyed for a lifetime of moments, My hands could touch you, the softness they felt, the love within each touch, melted prints upon your face, Time is running out quickly, let not our hearts suffer, for we know how true, one soul was made for the other, Shame not the heavens, nor the God who made us, destined to be, holiness of this is not spoken of, I wear you in silk satin lips, with a charmed smile, your heart is mine, and you know it. [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-28-2009 07:00 AM).] |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
"I dreamed of you last night more than I have ever dreamed we laughed in meadows of snow running as children, smiling." Yes, my wife and I have done that. We walked to a country school. As always a lovely poem!!! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I wear you in silk satin lips, with a charmed smile, your heart is mine, and you know it. Another soft, romantic piece, M. Especially these ending lines. Always a pleasure reading you. |
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Lone_Wolf84 Junior Member
since 2009-05-26
Posts 21 |
I love that last part Like u won't let him get away. Much respect. Great Poem. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
The last part was the highlight of this poem, ARH! Well done my friend. ARCTIC WIND |
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