When You Lie in My Moonlight

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Open Poetry #45

When You Lie in My Moonlight

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-09-27 12:43 PM

When you lie in my moonlight
And capture my night
Please hold me completely
Til dawn’s purple light

Wrap me in whispers
Enfold me with breath
Then conquer my heart
To its ultimate depth

Let velvet soft lips
Send me into the sky
With the intimate sound
Of a soft gentle sigh

When dawn’s early purple
Becomes morning skies
Please leave me with passionate
Tears in your eyes

When you lie in my moonlight
You capture my night
And yet become prisoner
To exquisite delight

Elizabeth SAntos

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

1 posted 2009-09-27 12:52 PM

I enjoyed the subtle eroticism in this piece. Beautifully written.

Arana Darkwolf

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2009-09-27 01:03 PM

nice

larzana
Member

since 2009-09-17

Posts 55

3 posted 2009-09-27 01:17 PM

Very nice.

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

4 posted 2009-09-27 11:39 PM

Liz, you are always such a joy to read. This is absolutely beautiful. As always!

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2009-09-28 10:48 PM

Dear Liz, that is such a lovely warm tender

love poem that is a real delight to read.

I loved it dear lady and you too.

Lindsay

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-09-29 12:51 PM

This is so soft, sensual and romantic.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2009-09-29 02:38 PM

Liz, there are so many beautiful sides to your writing ~ and to you.

~ Sweet, spiritual, sensitive ~ and sensual!

Love 'n a hug,

Linda

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2009-09-29 05:38 PM

Oh, Elizabeth, I do love your passionate night song!

Love,
Margherita

naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

9 posted 2009-09-30 06:53 PM

I think your poem is very subtle,warm & beautiful.Thanks for sharing.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2009-09-30 07:21 PM

very romantic!

Penwing
Member

since 2009-07-27

Posts 73
Waverly, MN

11 posted 2009-09-30 09:47 PM

wow again i have read 2 of your works and they have both left me with a beautiful immage

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