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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2009-09-27 09:54 AM


A Poem Written To You

© Copyright 2009 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-09-27 11:47 AM


How exquisite, gentleman poet
You take tenderness to a different level.
You have every right to claim the name of Pablo, as your hearts beat to the same passionate rhythm it seems
This poem will long be remembered
I believe it is your heart that is holding the pen
Beautiful poem  beautifully illustrated,
Take care, Sir Pablo
Liz

Elizabeth Santos
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Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-09-27 11:54 AM


I forgot to say thank you, dear poet
I had to gasp for air and get my bearings before I realized the omission.
Your words do leave us breathless
I thank you from the bottom of my heart
Little dove

vandana
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3 posted 2009-09-27 01:06 PM


nice write
inkedgoddess
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Ohio
4 posted 2009-09-27 03:08 PM


breathless in its beautiful embrace
brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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nowhere and everywhere
5 posted 2009-09-28 12:22 PM



so, um...bc

is there a waiting list for a poem?   lol

this is beautiful, as always




LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
6 posted 2009-09-28 01:33 AM



A very tender heart warming poem my friend

A delight to read Bill. Take care.

Lindsay

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2009-09-28 07:58 AM


Beautifully written, Bill.  I think one of your best and most tender poems.

M

Margherita
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Eternity
8 posted 2009-09-29 05:56 AM


Such delicate romantic words are a delight to read, dear Bill. The picture is a perfect match too.

Love this mutual inspiration very much.

Love,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2009-09-29 10:37 AM


lovely romantic poetry,
this one was written from the heart!

~ARH

suthern
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10 posted 2009-09-29 12:35 PM


Nerudo would be proud. *S* What a tender beauty this is!
Oklahoma Rose
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Oklahoma USA
11 posted 2009-09-29 12:56 PM


Awwww Bill, you are such a kind a passionate man. I always enjoy reading youyr poetry.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
12 posted 2009-09-29 01:02 PM


wonderful!!  can I please put my name on the list for a poem too??

Bisous de Paris
RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Ariana
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Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
13 posted 2009-09-29 10:25 PM


OK where is the sign up list.  Me first.  Very romantic poetry with flowing words from the heart.

Ariana

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
14 posted 2009-09-30 01:03 PM


Elizabeth - I'm humbled by your thoughts, thank you...

vandana - thank you for reading...

inkedgoddess - thank you for your reply...

brneyedgrly - no waiting list, as I love to write a poem for you. Let me know...

Lindsay - glad you liked this one...

Maureen - tenderness is of your heart...

Margherita - always nice to read your reply...

A Romantic Heart - yes, written from the heart flowing to a pen...

suthern - thank you, your words are an inspiration...

Oklahoma Rose - I'm happy that you read my writings, and for your warm replies...

Roniece Dawson-Bruce - yes, let me know anytime...

Ariana - a poem to write for brown eyes, let me know...

BC

passing shadows
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displaced
15 posted 2009-09-30 07:24 PM


goodness! Seriously you should do a book with all of these! Beautiful!
Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
16 posted 2009-09-30 11:05 PM


BC

Didn't you write one for "Brown Eyes" about 15 years ago?  Maybe a little resurection is needed.  See what you can find.

Ariana

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