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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-09-25 07:06 AM



Scarlet crawls
beyond the bend

the night is wide
with premonitiom

the rhymes convene
forget me knots
all tossed, the
shadows swept, the
colors prime beyond
the veils of dark's
deception

the windows rise
ajar with chimes
the feathers shed
where once you flew
the latitudes in
my direction

the waking call
as mist connects

I wear your rain
the clouds fall down
in storms of recollection

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-25-2009 08:01 AM).]

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-25 07:09 AM


Awesome, dear Michele. I can feel the emotions you put into this piece of true poetry.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2009-09-25 07:17 AM


ms inki..when you wear a storm you are always lovely, enjoyed your spill here
WTBAKELAR
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Senior Member
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089
Utah, USA
3 posted 2009-09-25 10:56 AM


Lovely poem, as is your new picture.
Really enjoyed both.

Love always,
Tracey

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2009-09-25 12:44 PM


mmmmmm....

I hear you.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

larzana
Member
since 2009-09-17
Posts 55

5 posted 2009-09-25 04:59 PM


Reading this made me feel peaceful inside.
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2009-09-25 06:14 PM


"I wear your rain
the clouds fall down
in storms of recollection"

~ Love how poetically you expressed those feelings.


Linda

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