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Ingrediants New Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 8 |
Sanguine These written words of pages plied My linguistic tools on which I rely Are all my drug to keep me sane They pause the world and numb the brain My reckless pen scrawls gibberish Thoughts radiant in design A mystery to the world Conceptions I divine Through negligence of sound regard I repeat my ill mistakes Fix these holes that leak the truth Fix my constant aches Problems seem to cultivate They multiply for sure Not long now I have my fix For now I must endure As leaden lids slip down my eyes Torment calls with nights disguise I pry apart my brittle mind Rummage through my hidden core Expose these secrets long confined The answers I been waiting for But sanguine skies spell journey’s end To join my body as I ascend Velvet clouds, translucent shrouds They hinder my escape I shut my eyes to my demise This torture I can’t take Raking sheets of memories Unfurl within my grasp Whispered thoughts spit poison truth My mind is torn aghast I plead my soul to let me through I need this prize, which I attained The speck of light is just in view But still the haze remained |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I find this very well written and enjoyed the gift of your passion (in poetry). So welcome to Pip! Margherita ps I have just discovered that you had posted this same poem as your first post in "Teen poetry". One of the few rules on here is to post one's poems only in one of the forums. Looking forward to your next one. Maybe you should give a quick look at the rules. Thank you. |
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mottsey New Member
since 2009-09-14
Posts 3Queensland Australia |
Great poem Sanguine. You have captured the pained heart very well. Keep writing, I'd love to read more soon. |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
you've written well...i liked it a loooootttt...waiting for your next one....post soon |
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larzana Member
since 2009-09-17
Posts 55 |
That was wonderfully written. Keep writing!  |
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