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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico 
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Amongst dreams I saw, though my eyes pressed in sleep. I felt a child, dancing in meadows. Blessed abundance! Posies chanting a destiny to Wind-Gods beckoning me down paths without signs. Mileage etched deep within an ageless face. And when I fell beneath a starless sky, my body prone in universal bliss; I prayed for wizardries that I may rise above meadows as a feather floating above wildflowers bowing to life' s uncharted storm. I felt my being lift. The fields below sway in distant glow. Navigator, as I watch the Wind-Gods laugh. If in dreams, then so in life! ~~ Janet K. Brennan 2009 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jb...the wind gods do laugh..they say that is the sound of their laughter moving through the trees..enjoyed your art ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is totally after my own heart, dear Janet. Absolutely beautiful and magical. Love, Margherita |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
I know the wind-Gods are always with you dear Jan. Katriona  |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
In knowing you jan..I have to echo what h2h has said, at the same time tell you that this one took my breath away....peaceseaker.... |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Oh thanks so much my poet friends Happy that you enjoyed th is one Jan |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jbstillwater - more than once I read these words, you wrote them well... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
An exceptionally appealing read! ~ Every blessed line of it. Here are a few of my favourite ones: "And when I fell beneath a starless sky, my body prone in universal bliss; I prayed for wizardries that I may rise above meadows as a feather floating above wildflowers bowing to life' s uncharted storm."  You're quite the writer, Ms. Stillwater!  Linda |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Thank you so much, Earth Angel. I am so happy that you enjoy my writing! Huggs Jan |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Enjoyed reading this one ,nature and its ways are always mysterious. Love Esha |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This was a joy to read, Janet. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Janet, I enjoyed every word, sound, image, concept of this, as well as the poem in its entirety - and I love the "stillwater" part of your name. Owl |
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