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Margherita
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0 posted 2009-09-24 05:53 PM




My picture - Cap Gris Nez - Northern France

***


This bread


In tasting this bread may we give grace.



Every single grain spike
exhales its consciousness
over the whole grain field,
where it lingers to be read
by the swift touch ofthe wind
and by attentive eyes.

If we halt for just a moment
at the edge of this golden glory
we will be able to inhale the essence
of a millennia-long story.
This soil is drenched in whispers
gathered upon the rivers of time.

This site has known the sighs
of soldiers, peasants and lovers,
it has heard children’s laughter,
it has been soaked with tears,
it has known all of life’s seasons
its sacred songs and deep sorrows.

Now the field has found its apotheosis,
in this blessed abundance of harvest.
Displayed in beauty it greets the sun,
it waves in grace to the stars above.
Soon it will know transformation
and delight us with its unique fragrance.

Let us remember then that love,
forgiveness and new awareness
can purify the battlefields of the world,
consecrating them as tools of peace,
assuring nourishment to the hungry multitudes
who still lack their share of Nature’s gifts.

In tasting this bread may we give grace.

***

© Copyright 2009 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2009-09-24 05:54 PM




My picture of my homemade bread


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2009-09-24 06:55 PM


Very nice...James
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-09-24 10:12 PM


From the bountiful harvest to your homemade bread! Margherita, this post appealed to several of my senses. ~ Visually, emotionally, gastronomically...

A poem of great depth, beauty, and meaning.




Linda AT


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4 posted 2009-09-25 02:05 AM


Margherita,

I love your picture - I have never seen a wheat field.  It's beautiful.  I love your poem - it reads like a prayer.  I love your bread - I, too, am a bread baker.

I love you.
Alison

Margherita
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5 posted 2009-09-25 05:42 AM


Thank you, dear James, dear Linda and dear Alison for your appreciation. I was somehow "haunted" by the visions and voices I experienced when I was looking at this "sea of wheat" in August. Had to let my pen work out the memories and images.

I love to bake bread, there is a profound pleasure in rediscovering these simple gratifications.

Love, joy and peace.
Margherita

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6 posted 2009-09-25 10:24 AM


Your talent with visions, words and  even baking , hold me in awe. latearrival.
Marchmadness
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7 posted 2009-09-25 12:00 PM


Margherita, If you lived near me I would be knocking on your door looking for some of that bread. It looks delicious. Your seem to be a lady of many talents, master poet being chief among them. I am saving this one.
                                Ida

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8 posted 2009-09-25 12:28 PM



Let us remember then that love,
forgiveness and new awareness
can purify the battlefields of the world,
consecrating them as tools of peace,
assuring nourishment to the hungry multitudes
who still lack their share of Nature’s gifts.

In tasting this bread may we give grace.
______________

  I agree with Alison..this is a prayer

              greatly needed

love, shellie


OwlSA
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9 posted 2009-09-25 12:43 PM


Oh, Margherita!  Your poem and your first picture were so beautiful and rich with Margherita-ness and flavour, and then, on top of all that, your tantalising homemade bread!  I am imagining going all the way from South Africa to Italy for a slice of Margherita-bread and savouring it slowwwwwly with my eyes closed and my tastebuds open - and that CRUST!  I can taste and chew on it and the rest of the slice, while also smelling the sweet scent of newly baked bread as I eat it.  (Do I really have to eat my ordinary bought bread, now?)

Owl

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10 posted 2009-09-25 05:06 PM


What a field it is! (I would never have been able to tell English wasn't your first language, you use it beautifully!)
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11 posted 2009-09-25 07:17 PM


You have given such profound meaning and voice to a simple field of grain. The pictures are beautiful, the poem is beautiful and the heart and sentiment behind these are beautiful as well. Thank you for sharing, my friend, and God bless,

-Bob


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12 posted 2009-09-25 07:41 PM


Thank you, dear Martiyo, dear Ida, dear Shellie, dear Diana, dear Larzana and dear Bob! Your generous, loving replies warmed my heart.

I'd love to have you sitting at our table and enjoying this blessed bread together with some Italian specialities.   ... and a glass of wine of course to go with it.

Love,
Margherita

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13 posted 2009-09-25 11:39 PM


Yes, indeed, dear Margherita, a beautiful prayer and lovely pictures.  I'm a bread lover myself but who knows what the future will hold as I proceed to uproot myself and live with my sons in Cape Town.  They adhere to a raw food diet but I believe one can do wonders with raw food so let's see if we can come up with something similar.  Many challenges ahead!

Love
Helen

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14 posted 2009-09-25 11:59 PM


AMEN!Loved the "history" of this place and the idea that, this shared history ((this land))is part of us all, even as we eat this bread, becoming one with that and transforming it into nourishment of mind and body. You did great with the language and the impressions and I can't wait to read more of your shares. Thank you ~tera

Man was born free, and he is everywhere in chains." - Jaque Rouseau

Bill Charles
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15 posted 2009-09-26 03:45 PM


Margherita - the grace of a loaf of bread, well written...

BC

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16 posted 2009-09-27 03:05 AM


Very nice.
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17 posted 2009-09-27 05:00 AM


Margherita...I must say this is the first picture of wheat that I have seen that looked like it could speak to a person and I believe it spoke to you in a most wonderful tender way. Great poem...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Margherita
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18 posted 2009-09-27 09:40 AM


Thank you all, dear Poet friends, for your kind and loving comments. I enjoyed them greatly.

Have a wonderful Sunday!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

LindsayP
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19 posted 2009-09-28 11:50 PM



If we halt for just a moment
at the edge of this golden glory
we will be able to inhale the essence
of a millennia-long story.
This soil is drenched in whispers
gathered upon the rivers of time.

Dear Margherita, you have made me look at a field of wheat in a different light. Over

here in Aussie land we have millions of acres sown with wheat but your poem makes me realize just how important it is.

A very thoughtful poem dear Lady. Love

Lindsay  

Margherita
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20 posted 2009-09-29 06:35 AM


Thank you, dear Lindsay, your words warm my heart.

Love,
Margherita

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21 posted 2009-09-29 02:36 PM


Okay now I gotta go make a sandwich

thanks for the reality check Margherita.

Margherita
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22 posted 2009-10-06 04:22 AM


((((Dixie)))), thank you for peeking in and reacting in such a healthy way

Love,
Margherita

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