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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-10-05 09:00 AM



I could see in your eyes that you knew those answers
that you sipped them like green tea with frost on
the windows that made you realize the chill outside
was a thousand miles from the warmth of your new tattoo

and when you admired it all lady like in the mirror
you said you knew that woman always lived next door
because you had heard her often late at night
when you were dreaming, and now you met her in daylight

she was more lovely than you had ever imagined
and it didn't really surprise you that I was interested
in getting to know her almost daily more often
and perhaps you would come along too, if I wished

just to see if there was more of her in you than you imagined


_______________

daark (do of water)



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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-10-05 10:22 AM


How intriguing, dear D.!

This "knowing of knowing" is perfect for the "do of water" series, water is such a perfect conductor of impulses ...

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2009-10-05 04:59 PM


you had heard her often late at night
when you were dreaming, and now you met her in daylight

What delightful discovery... I didn't want this to end! *S*

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-10-06 06:07 AM


ms mar, thanks lady friend


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ms suthern , thanks my friend for your eyes

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