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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
I press the button and renew The page with someone's masterpiece. I see a so-called review Of letters less than letters missed. The comment's author claims to be A bard, a critic and a muse. This three-in-one, or none-in-three Can't get the core of someone's views, Of thoughts in their poetic flight. Yes, it is hard - they tend to flee, But it's the artist's one true might To see what other eyes can't see, And poets for a day or two, Who shape a random phrase by chance, Who haven't proved a sentence true, Just have no right to set demands For those who ponder, dare and speak, Who search, discover and create. Their fame is yet to reach its peak, And as for you, it's way too late. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sounds very unfriendly. I agree that we should not judge the thoughts of poets. If we ask for a critique of the poem that is something different. I see you have a "no" in the critique question, so people should not critique. But this certainly doesn't mean you don't like a comment of appreciation of your work. You write well. Love and peace. Margherita  |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
It's too late in more ways than you know. An enjoyable write: though I have no right to judge. What does the Bible say: judge not and you will not be judged. But I don't find this true. Hey, I'm no judge but I like your poem still |
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