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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
You wake up at six: intercourse with your spouse. You're under the blanket with tightly shut eyes. At seven a postman arrives to your house With two printed portions of scandals and lies. You turn the TV on. Your damn daily dose Of lies is exceeded with fresh morning news. You firmly believe global changes are close - You have no idea they've hidden the truth. In life you've achieved less than nothing, you're poor Though you were the best both at college and school. Well, man, who are you? You are not even sure. In fact, you're a pawn in the game of a fool. |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Ohhh I like this a lot and sounds all to familiar, I think a lot of people recognise themselves here, Thank you for sharing your thoughts, and experience with us... Annie  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
AWD you are getting better with age my friend, I think that is one of your best. A message well written. Take care. Lindsay |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Three questions: 1. Are you really that beautiful a disaster? 2. Where have they hidden the truth. 3. How much will charge me to tell me where it is. This is without a doubt an exciting poem. |
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